*Anguished Howl Here*
It took WAY too long to finish this page. Just like the first time I tried drawing it. I don’t know, maybe I should have rethunk it at a basic level, but something about it turns my brain OFF. Is it boring? Is that it? Do I subconsciously find it boring as hell? I don’t know…forgive me, everyone. UGHHHH.
No worries, my guess its because Mori doesn’t speak.
Awww how small and petite she used to be,
Sep 16th page seems to be page 1. Understandably you didn’t backdate older pages, but what page were you on when the duck died way back in september? I don’t remember the page number and seem to be a bit lost.
I was on Page 3 of Chapter 18. Quite a lot more to reupload. I’m taking the time to colorize all the old pages I never colored before. Except for the first chapter, that is.
Why not first chapter?
‘Cause when I get time I’m going to completely replace the first chapter.
I don’t recall exactly what used to be in this spot, but the story seems to continue fine. Knowing what’s coming may help, but in general, don’t worry about it.
The lines were identical but the art wasn’t even there at all, it was just circles and boxes talking to each other.
I saw your flier inside the garbage the other day at my comic convention & the art on flier is better than the comic itself. Very misleading. I suggest you take up on life and figure drawing classes. I think that will help you out in the long run. All your characters look the same. It’s all cookie cutter anime. You need to take some time & learn to draw better. Please don’t be offended. This is here to help you, true believer.
I don’t think I’m exactly disagreeing with you, but one of the things I’ve noticed with this comic is that I’ve never actually had any difficulty recognizing characters — even on the sketch pages. There are a lot of comics with professional art where I can’t say that.
I agree that life and figure drawing classes could be good, though.
Hmm. I wonder if Ernie got her previous self’s memories all at once or over time, and what the circumstances were. If she was twelve years old and found that she remembered all of high school, could she test out of it so she didn’t have to go through that again?