AAAAH! Why do all my worst monsters take the form of amorphous blobs? (Mostly, it’s because demons usually don’t have forms at all, so it’s either “amorphous blob” or “looks like a human.”)
In other news: Continuing my collaboration with Merlin on our story. She insists on making it as “shiny” as possible which is why we’re taking our time on it. It’s paying off and soon you’ll see!
oh crap. O.o
Seconding that motion. o_O
The incubus can’t affect Greg though,
I think we’re going to see another reason why these three are the wild cards soon. Heck, the incubus has to actually have sex with a woman to control her, so they’ve got time to escape the hentai tentacles.
Whoo shiny
time for Hitomi to have some trauma, i suppose o_o
This might leave a mark.
I’d think incubus would look like their idea of a perfect mate to each of them rather than a blob.
So, it became tentacle hentai.
And now cue hitomi turning everyone male?
I would rather put my money on Elka at this point, but possible.
Or Greg could go Wolf, smash!
Stock plot, now to damage the portal before truly heinous things pass through.
Hitomi’s eyes are rather weird in the first panel. They shouldn’t be that large, plus from that perspective, we shouldn’t be able to see that portion of her face. As it is, she looks like a frog or something, so I would suggest moving her eyes ‘down’ towards her nose and all to way over to her upper facial outline.
For clarification, I went in and edited her pupils a little, and adjusted eye placement.
http://i.imgur.com/tzu9zsY.png
Granted, now she looks terrified, but I couldn’t figure out how to shorten her eyes or make them look angrier, but it definitely looks more anatomically correct.