Something about the last panel is just “off” I wish I had taken more time to get it right… Also, going back to what I said about not wanting Thoria to be completely bad…well, that doesn’t mean they weren’t bad.
Something about the last panel is just “off” I wish I had taken more time to get it right… Also, going back to what I said about not wanting Thoria to be completely bad…well, that doesn’t mean they weren’t bad.
I think it’s that the angle of Mori’s torso doesn’t put her shoulders and head on the ground.
The “shoof-shoof” thing is great, though.
It looks to me like Mori’s left knee is dislocated and her right leg is badly broken. But hey, they could be.
Nancy should be more leaning into the pull, though. Her vertical posture and even gait doesn’t align with Mori’s body being resistant enough to drag her arm back that far. Humans also generally walk with the arms opposite their legs forward and back, but not necessarily when dragging something.
Hmm. I wonder why Nancy feels the need to move Mori at all. She could just puncture her suit, knock her unconscious, and let the environment take care of the rest.